To all the impatient people out there!!
HERE IT IS! The result of the awesome Lyric Contest! ^o^
First of all! Congrats to everyone who went through the whole month writing their very own lyrics! I'm really proud of our BRIANS! Really I don't know what to say but say THANK YOU for being such awesome writers! *_*
THANK YOU for participating and giving me a hard time in judging which led me to ask SitD for help! XD;
I really enjoyed listening to all the entries I got!
Some are really impressive <3 I'm really proud of everyone *_*
So here it iiiis!!!! (The quotes are comments by our dearest Stef who helped me decide! ^o^ <3 )
Why are there so many 'I need a Girl' entries?! xDDDD;;;
Links removed due to ToS
- busanthugs -
Song: I need A Girl
First thing first~ Unfortunately I had to 'disqualify' you for not following the rule :( I think you did an amazing job though! And I feel sorry for being like that but since many of the others wanted to do the same thing, but got a 'NO' I feel obliged to do this ;_____;
STILL! I want to give you some comments about your writing! ^o^
First of all.. This kinda reminds me of American Boy XD I dunno why though LOL maybe because of the Rap-R'n'B mix style kekeke.
Honestly I really enjoyed listening to this *_* And the content.. nice niiice! Totally love it! :) (I love the 'When I'm flippin and trippin and slipping and lippin' totally roxxx imo! <3 )
I'm looking forward to your participation in the next Lyrics Contest (if theres gonna be one xD ) and pleeasseee read the rules carefully <3 hahah!
May I ask.. Whacchu mean with 'Baby Jae's a woman'? HAHAHAHAH!!!
Excellent writing skills. The rap shows creative and well time fitted word usage.
- dbangshinee -
First...Love your voice! *lol* Why is your singing so awesome? *_____*
Now to the lyrics~ It's really cute imo <3 Really fits the concept and it has a nice story hihihihi <3 Totally can relate to it XP
Some parts were kinda out of beat~ and I think it could've been easily solved by changing some words here and there, the ending was...fast HAHAAH XD; (like.. at first I thought she's just having a crush on him, thinking those words whenever she sees him, but the last part 'Now you are mine' kinda got me off guard XD) anyways~ I still think its cute and all in all you did a GREAT job!
The story is clichÃ©, but arenâ€™t all k-pop songs like that? So thatâ€™s not something to stumble on. What I did mind was that words were rushed together to make a sentence and were squeezed in the time-interval. ... Beautiful vocals. Melodic. Pleasant to listen to.
- Firefly -
Goosebumps aaaahhhhh *brrrr* ;____; I kinda got teary when I first listened to it (in the subway again lol xD ). It has a sad story and your performance of it totally suits these lyrics *_*
The verse was PERFECT imo, the beat, the words everything just fit perfectly! The 'don't you lie to me' part... wow.. Thats all I can say.. just wow! Really well done! Like.. It felt so... ... true. Like you encountered someone who did that to you ;_;
For me, the flow got lost somehow during the middle of the chorus though, the words at the end were..lengthened (? XDDDD ) which confused me for a little while. But just for a little while cause the ending was really awesome again <3
The whole song was just reeeeaaallyy reaally beautiful *love*
I was surprised that the lyrics were actually the opposite (kinda) of the original. As the song started off I was expecting a sort of English translation of Wasurenaide, but then the word â€œit is a lieâ€ hit me. Very sad lyrics, true lyrics.
- Hanipazui -
Song: I need a Girl
HAHA Hani XD why you being boy!hani? *lol* 'Could I be your number one guy' caught me off guard XD
Is this BL? hahhahaha!!
The intro was so sexy idek! Not just the intro.. the WHOLE song was pure... how to say? SEKS(SHI)! XD
'I hope you're in no hurry tho' I actually like this part! But something kinda messed the flow >o<
I gotta say though, that I really like your lyrics! Just as I said.. totally sexy *___* And how you sang it.. AWESOME! You perfectly portrayed the hotness :P kekekkeke~~
Pervy Hani ftw! I love what she said/sang in the intro. Very good lyrics, thereâ€™s nothing random in it. Everything follows up nicely. Also a good story upbuild. From seducing, to describing, to â€¦ the action (but thatâ€™s where the song ends xD
- Kyllia -
Song: I need a Girl
L-O-V-E IT! The story is really beautiful (ok.. no its not beautiful since they're breaking up but you know what I mean do you? XD )
You gave a reason for the Break up, I know what's happening, and you chose the perfect words to describe how you're feeling :) Just simple words with a lot of meaning behind them ^^ The beat of your prechorus (or was it still a verse? I dunno right now xD ) was.. how should I say it? It was not bad but there was something that bothered me.. like some beats/words were not exactly on spot (intonation-wise) which makes the whole song a little different ^^
Buuutttt...I gotta say that I especially like your Intro! It's sooo true! ;___;
And the chorus is just.. IN YOUR FACE XD; well.. everything is pretty much IN YOUR FACE rofl.
Good lyrics, she chose her words so that they would match the tempo of the song and thereâ€™s still consistency in the story sheâ€™s telling.
- Sagacchi -
Song: I need a Girl
*dying inside* AAAAAH I LOVE THIIS SO MUCH I'M DYING XD
Just the 'Ahh' in the beginning makes me burst into laughter already XD And you make me want Uyu too *cries* ;____;
Since I know how obsessed you are.. I totally feel the lyrics! HAHAHHAHA XD Like really...It was just a matter of time when you can't hold back anymore.. and this time just came XD;
The 'I think I need to go to the supermarket' lol! Not really the beat but never mind! :P
And I don't have to say how much I love the chorus do I ? XD
I totally believed her when Saga said â€œsick of being thirstyâ€. Very convincing!
- xKeirafanx -
Song: This Song
Huhuuu The lyrics.. Why so sweet and cute and sad at the same time? ;_;
The flow was there the whole time! <3 The last part...gave me goosbumps.. *o* I don't even know what to say more! The story is just really really pretty. Even though the lines didn't rhyme, the flow didn't get lost which is imo a really great thing! I have many favorite parts in here *_* Like I said the last part, and the 'Cause my ears, ma arms, my hand, they are here' aaah that was really pretty <3
You totally did an awesome job <3
The choice of words fits perfectly! The words follow the tempo of the song, and thereâ€™s no loss at all of story. Good lyrics, very deep.
Everyone done reading? Good! Cause now I'll reveal who won ;)
- Spoiler: Show
- CONGRATULATIONS TO TAMMY AKA FIREFLY!!!!
I really had a hard time! Everyone did such a great job and I totally didn't know whom I should give the 'Gold Medal' XDDD; After thinking about it for many hours I decided to give it to Firefly <3
Tammy! Your writing skills are really awesome! The story of your song was really sad, and I said it already, but will say it again, it brought me tears! I got goosebumps even more because of your voice. Your soulful voice and singing skills fit such songs perfectly! Thank you for participating and congratulations on winning!!! ^o^
Congratulations to everyone, once again, who participated in this! I'm really proud of all <3
Please don't be sad if you didn't win! I assure you! EVERYONE as in EVERYONE did an awesome job! *_*
And since I can see how much effort you put into this contest by writing your lyrics, I decided to give EVERYONE a little present (fanstuff of course XD ). The winner will get a special reward of course ;)
Everyone who participated in this, please send me your address via PM. (except for Saga and Chantelle lol~)
Your Full Name, Address, City, Country.
I'll try to have the stuff ready till next month ^o^